A review submitted today for one of my fics:

I do think that you need to do a little more research in to your subject matter ands the star wars universe in general.

For instance, Nar-Shada has never been and imperial world, it has always been controlled by the huts, and Myn new that Lara was alive. At the end of the wraith books he is in Wedge's office with Tycho, and together they listened to the message she left because they needed Myn's opinion on her message. In the message she basically let him know that she was alive and going by the name Kernney.

My response:

A couple notes: There's no indication as to whether Donos actually read the message or not at the end of Solo Command. The message was intercepted by Han Solo and Wedge Antilles while in the cockpit of the Millenium Falcon. They forwarded the message, but it was never stated whether Donos read it or not. There was never a scene in that novel where Donos, Celchu, and Antilles reviewed the message in Antilles' office. 

Second, there were passing mentions of an Imperial shipyard over Nar Shaddaa's orbit leading up to and during the Galactic Civil War. This suggests that the planet was in fact under control of the Galactic Empire during the time Darvix would have lived there.

(What I should have added: Your spelling and grammar is atrocious and you should be ashamed of yourself)

Research that, sucker. 

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